Aeons ago we met
and held hands
ages passed between
one glimpse and another
it took upheavals
to bring us together
Lores got written,
weapons clashed
worlds were plunged into chaos
in an attempt to keep us apart
through raging thunder
and whirlpools
we made it to the shore
only to lose ourselves
in the sands of time
12 so spoke the wise:
Awww...how utterly romantic :) But, I wonder...do the last 2 lines imply something tragic or wanting? Or do I read tragedy in everything?? :(
lovely.
NICE ONE. THE END WAS A LITTLE SAD.
Sorry I was out of circulation for sometime and will be writing shortly.
Mixed brew....u read it right....the end is tragic or shall we say real.
Galadriel....thanks. dont dwell on it too much though. Have a great life ahead.
nsiyer: welcome back. The end I believe is the real end unlike the hindi film ends we have become used to.
Will look forward to your updates.
u have narrated the whole gamut of life in so few a words. Hats off
Balvinder nice to see you here :)
thanks for the appreciation..
absolutely beautiful, pinku.
Wow Pinku! I wish it ended differently though...
But you are right I guess, this is more true to real life.
IHM.....I knew you would agree.. :)
ari baap re... very profound, and you have to feel to write like this... just remembered a poem called Void by dippyblogs, which can read as a sequel to this...
brilliant....
awesome !! very well written ...captures love and life perfectly
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